Torment (Book Two) WRITING CONTEST
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HEY GUYS <3
Unfortunately, I've been extremely busy and Wattpad and this story have gotten away from me. However, my inbox and messages and comments have been exploding for the past year with readers begging me to finish the story. And I agree, this story is not complete and that stinks :( It bothers me too.
SO... since I've pretty much decided it's been too long for me to pick this story back up, I was thinking of letting YOU, my readers, finish it for me.
Submit a message to me about what you would make happen in the story and how you would finish it. Tell me how much longer you'd make the story. Honestly, at this point, I would' t care if the story had one more chapter. IT JUST NEEDS AN ENDING. Do not message me your draft or chapters. Just tell me briefly what your plan would be.
I'll announce the winner in February (subject to change depending on messages), and you'll be given the task to finish Torment however you'd like :)
You will receive full ownership of your part of the story.
THANKS and I love you all. Your interest and support over these years has been incredible. And I've been working on a new story I hope you all will enjoy in the near future.
Now get those creative, writing, Luna-loving gears going! :D
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