My Christmas Intruder

My Christmas Intruder

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After binge watching a bunch of Christmas movies, McKayla decides to whip up her special hot cocoa but instead finds a thief ,about the same age as her, attempting to steal her and her family's gifts. What does she do? Call the police? Wake up her parents? No, she chases after the thief herself and threatens to send him to jail if he doesn't become her personal assistant. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> Note: This story is based on a true story, me making hot cocoa in the middle of the night. Also, this story is just to light up your Christmas spirit. I don't really plan on deleting this, but I can't promise you I won't. Also, I just realized how weird the name of the first chapter is. It was supposed to be a pun that turned horribly wrong. For all you people laughing at the title name, or weirded out, sorry.
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This is a redone, more realistic, more detailed, more writing experienced version of "Her Favorite Book" I wrote that story in 2021, I'm pretty sure, and I was less experienced than I was compared to now. Looking back at the story, I realized I could have offended certain people with my depictions of the abuse in the Rosa household, as well as her relationship with Charlie, and how she seems to not care as much about him as an older sibling, especially a protective one, would act. All of these problems are going to be fixed and all the chapters will be edited. I would also like to make it clear, I might change a couple things in the book itself, like, for example, I'm changing Alex(Ryder's younger brother) into a little girl who only speaks Spanish, and her name is Allie. Also, Ryders household life before Stella(Why his mom works so much, why his dad isn't in his life, etc) will be written in more detail than before. If I offended anyone in the original version of this story, I deeply apologize. Now, to those certain people that like the original story, I won't be taking it down, as it was and still is a big growing opportunity for my writing career as of now.

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