Purifying truth

Purifying truth

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Only the first chapter is done but I would like to see feedback on what peoples thoughts are, set in the future but jumps back and forth from current present time to the past. About an alien race invading earth known as purifiers. The intent is to have it be where we attacked first and the only reason they're coming after the world is because we provoked them. Feedback and criticizim is welcomed. Looking for if I should continue with it. Also havent gone through completely on grammar corrections but spelling should be golden so forgive me on that
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This is the story I'm writing for NaNoWriMo 2015. The goal: 50,000 word RAW draft written entirely in the month of November. Unlike most of my stories, which I prefer to edit before posting, I'm actually going to post updates to this at the end of each day in chapter-sized chunks. The idea behind this story is that a terrorist attack in the near future causes the US to go hyper-isolationist, to the point that it abandons Hawaii and Alaska to fend for themselves. They do, forming the United Pacific States (maybe with a few other island countries). Hawaii then goes on to turn itself into the new world police with stealthy, genetically modified cyber-soldiers. I'm marking this story as mature because there will be action scenes, and probably some interesting perspectives on nudity and relationships. I'm not planning on anything explicit, but this won't be a kids book. Validated winner at 50,040 words!

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