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Sour Patch
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    Time 1h 43m
Ongoing, First published Dec 26, 2017
Crushing pain, thats all he felt as he leaned against the brick wall. There were too many emotions running through his mind to pinpoint a single one. So it all merged together as a crushing pain. Taking a deep breath he blinked back the tears and anger gripping at his heart, then slowly walked away from the one place he thought he could always call home. The bags of groceries forgotten in the entryway, Keys left in the lock and his ring left on the floor. All unknown to the couple entwined in passion on his bed. Little did they know that they were so wrapped up in each other that they didnt notice he was watching as they moved down the hallway to engage in a lovers embrace.   



This is my first time writing a story I apologize for any mistakes, any feedback is appreciated thank you for reading.
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"SLIPPED INTO LOVE 💖"                                                    cover
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"Where are you going, Louis?" I asked concernedly as I saw Louis packing his things. "Away from here." Was all he said. He continued to throw clothes into his bag. "What? Why?" I walked closer to him, and began to reach out for him, but he moved away before I could. "I'm sorry. I.. I can't be here anymore." Louis slung the bag over his shoulder and began to walk out. "Whats going on?" A tear slid down my face. "I-I'll fix us. Just please, don't go." I saw Louis' hand clench into a fist. "I have to. Just stop talking and go do what you were doing." The door slammed, and I jumped. Tears began to fall down my face. I felt empty. The love of my life was gone. Louis' P.O.V. I dialed the number on my phone when I was far away from the house. "Is it done?" They asked. "I can't believe you made me hurt her like that. I love her, you know. I was going to marry her." I spat into the phone. A stray tear slid down my face, and I wiped it away quickly. "Well, this is your job now, Louis. You can't throw it away on a girl you supposedly love."