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Is your OC a Mary Sue? [OC Reviews open!]

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Melody_Of_Flowers

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Oh, Hi there! I see that you have either came here for curiosity or for my advice, so I'll go straight to the point!

Ever wondered if your OC is a Mary Sue? Well, it's your lucky day! Cause I shall judge your OC! (Not harshly).

[A reminder that this is my own opinion, some of you might agree and some might not, you can choose to accept my tips or don't]

I do specialize in anime OCs

OC Reviews are open!All Rights Reserved

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Strangers to Lovers by nilyryyr

||~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~|| HEAVILY INSPIRED BY AN MSA (MY STORY ANIMATED) VIDEO, I FELL IN LOVE WITH A BOY THAT I CAN NEVER HAVE. ||~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~|| Growing up with my sister, I tend to become shy around other people. Which means I have some trouble with my love life too. At first, I didn't mind as I was just trying to focus on school and my goals. And since I'm either too scared to talk to basically anyone, I'd be embarrassed to speak especially with boys. So I was a hopeless case, according to my sister. But he proved it to me nonetheless. I don't know how it happened, but it just did. ~ Hello! I wanted to try out a completely modern AU and original characters. Wish me luck!

Feel The Angst by virginsacrifice

(Highest ranking #2 in marysue) [previously titled "marysue roasts"] *warning* If you are a sensitive little child don't read this book, you'll probably end up crying... AND READ MY DISCLAIMER FIRST!! Basically, you can send me whatever you want and I'll do a rating/rant/give my opinion on it:)) but don't worry you still can send me ocs to rate Examples of things you can send: Ratings: ocs, book, au etc... Rant:anything cringe worthy Opinion: anything really(fandoms,idk food???)

★Realized★ | ★Book One★ by mushwrooms3

★••••★ This is a Naruhina story that takes place right after the pain attack and continues all the way until they're young adults. Naruto realizes his feelings for Hinata as he spends more time with her but puts them aside. War being right around the corner, he couldn't help but grimace at his decision to confess to her when it was announced and didn't think it was appropriate when everyone is so stressed about it. Naruto does not remember that Hinata confessed to him at all. Childhood traumas further prevent him from expressing his feelings. Hinata, meanwhile is saddened that Naruto doesn't remember her confession but decides to not bring it up. Protecting herself from further embarrassment. When the war was announced she distracted herself by getting stronger. She wanted to improve herself. ★••••★ A/N: I'm going to boost most of the characters skill sets and flesh out their potential that was wasted in the series. Did the whole cast dirty imo. The story will be edited/fixed after completion. P.S. Naruto will not be Ashura's reincarnation. However Sasuke will still be Indra if that makes sense? Naruhina will be reincarnations. (obviously) ★••••★ Published: July 8, 2022 Completed: TBD

The Mary-Sue Complaints Checklist by HatedLove6

My second Mary-Sue series revolving around specific complaints most people would declare as Mary-Sueish or considered as bad writing, which I don't agree with. This series includes: Writing solely in second person Using cliches or writing self-inserts Plot revolving around getting sucked into an alternative universe OCs paired up Canon characters OCs being related to Canon characters Powers of controlling all of the elements, a sudden surge of powers, and having or gaining wings Having a character come back to life, having musical talents, numerous hobbies, and knowing various languages Stories containing elderly characters that appear youthful Stories containing only "hot" characters Characters with multi-colored hair Characters with a lack of scars on a fighter The "sudden" surge of Japanese characters in stories Princesses vs Rebellious tomboy girls and girlish boys and macho girls Characters that cut, are into drugs or alcohol Characters with mental and emotional disorders, diseases, disabilities Characters whose bodies or souls are inhabited by other beings such as angels or demons Characters who use sex as an outlet The symptoms of lust Rule-breaking genres

Sunset✔️ by asianbbyg3

Sequel for " Sunrise" ______ Sasuke's eyes faltered for a moment before hardening once more. " Your a disgrace to the Uchiha name, with both your looks and actions. You would know that the Leaf is wrong and make our name be cleared." He snarled before turning around to walk towards Tobi. " Your not cleansing the Uchiha name, your making it worse! I'm tired of playing these childhood games with you! I made a promise to Itachi that I would protect you and keep you alive! It's hard to do that when your acting like a terrorist!" I grabbed his shoulder only for him to shake it off. " You wanna sever your bonds with everyone then do it! You'll learn! Once you fall back, we'll all be here to help you once again! Except I won't be." I huffed once more before turning to walk back to the group. " SASUKE! NO!" ~~~ { my first story plz don't mind the bad parts} Completed (Naruto Shippūden.) ( KakashixReader)

The Senju and The Uchiha (Naruto Fanfic)||Complete|| by LadyLucky13

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The Uzumaki Prodigy [DISCONTINUED] by lights_tion

Rin Uzumaki-Namikaze was Kushina and Minato's sole daughter. A prodigy at a young age, she learned and mastered all the jutsus and seals her parents left, including some high class ninjutsu. Though excelling at everything, she was required to go to the academy due to the new rule that was made after Itachi Uchiha graduated at his young age. How will Rin fare with her team and sensei? ~ PLEASE READ BELOW VERY IMPORTANT TO UNDERSTAND THE FANFIC ~ DISCLAIMER: Just like my other book/books, I do not own any of the Naruto characters. I only own Rin and Satoshi, but not their last names. Any songs or pictures I use will not be mine, only if I say so. ALSO: There will be swearing, so viewer discretion is advised. I have also changed a few things in this story; Sakura is now Satoshi, a boy who is like Sasuke, but less fangirls. Satoshi is stronger than Hinata, but weaker than Sasuke. Ino is now the only main fangirl instead of Sakura and Ino. ALSO I GET A LOT OF COMMENTS ABOUT THIS BUT no Naruto is not in this fanfic, as he is replaced by my version of him, Rin. Like a genderbend, but not at the same time. Naruko is too generic of a name for his genderbend. Anyways, please enjoy! Child Arc (Pre-shippuden): August 2015 - June 2016 Wind Arc: July 2016 - January 2017 Ocean Arc (Shippuden): January 2017 - cut off at August 2017 Kudos to @obsidianix for making my cover!

Not Alone by Yuzuki16

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When The Sun Shines (A Reika Namikaze Story) Book 1 by Zoros_Wife_Kaylee

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