On the Loop
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Annyeong kiddo!
I'm Kang Daniel. I'm going to tell you a tale(of myself keke) of a love story became an endless loop.
I love him but he kept rejecting me. Why does he not love me T-T???
This is a story of my life, my loop
not poop (even though it's gonna be shitty :p)
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This story is based on a very special fan video by an OngNiel fan. I really love her/his work. Go check out her/his channel if you really cherish and lovey OngNiel... This person really does great videos!
Video:
-Part 1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JMHGF6A4TG0
-Part 2 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sdiNXnaIRcE
Awesome Person's acc:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCs1BPbwqp2QSv25pVIs-s1w
Current name:Yue Hargreaves
sorry but for this story, I only took the concept where Ong will always reject Niel but the ending is a bit or might be really different. I'm also not sure haha. Sorry for everything and enjoy my first and crappy story.
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