A Chance To Break Me (UNDERGOING MAJOR EDITING)

A Chance To Break Me (UNDERGOING MAJOR EDITING)

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Everything about him attracted me to him but mostly, it was the way he seemed indifferent to his physical appearance. Forced by unavoidable circumstances to leave her beloved African home, seventeen year old Donna Imani travels to another country thousands of miles away to live with the mother she had only seen in photos and heard stories about. As she struggles to fit in the new family and adjust to the new school, her path crosses that of drop dead gorgeous Anton Rays whose good looks attracts both girls and boys in Westlake high school. But does Donna stand a chance with Anton and is the new mother everything Donna had always thought she would be? For Anton, life couldn't possibly get any better. With his parents away, he had a whole mansion to himself with everything he needed, looks to get any girl in his bed (not that he was particularly interested) grades to make any parent proud and a hundred thousand dollar sports car to his name. Everything was perfect, his only job was to look after his younger brother, until this skinny brown skin girl comes his way and makes him look over the dictionary for the meaning of the word love. But is he ready to love again or is he still chained to that one girl who broke his heart?
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"Born again, are you all dreaming? Wake up! Nicodemus was right! There's no way you can be born again! We're all already here, we were born! Now, we're gonna die! It's as simple as that." My face was hot and my hands were shaking. We're all gonna die... I pushed the memory back and shook my head, eyes angry and staring down the pastor. "Jesus fed his disciples and all the people around him a whole bunch of crap and they ate it." "Naomi!" "He didn't know what he was talking about because fictional characters in a story never do. They say the lines their authors give them because it's their job to. They don't exist. He never existed. You all should realize that sooner or later instead of wasting your time here, it's screwing with your minds." A pin could have dropped from the top floor and we would all hear it. "Then why don't you just leave." The cold words plummeted against my chest as quickly as they came. That was the pin drop, the end to all the excitement, but not. My heart hammered against my rib cage as the voice echoed through my ears, playing over and over. His words, they were insulting, they hurt, but I didn't show it. I turned and faced him and his eyes remained indifferent towards me. I froze in my seat. They were once this bright hazel, but they seemed darker now, furious. "If you feel that way, then leave." He spat. His jaw clicked at the end of his sentence. "Take your opinions, take your anger, take your indignant heart, and leave this church." ~~~ It never occurred to Naomi that He could have been real, that maybe a life of emotional hardship was the plan for her all along. If it had occurred, she never accepted the thought. She never accepted anything, but Carter. What was life? What was love? What was pain? What was happiness? What is God? Read the story of a broken girl who finds the truth through love.

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