I'm still practicing on writing stories so I would like to see people opinions on my work I don't mind if it has constructive criticism I just want to get better . I am aware I do make a lot of mistakes such as spelling and grammar but I do hope to improve
Thank you
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Hey first this isn't a book this I a short story
So the chapters aren't long it was just something I decided to put together as I wrote my book but leave me feedback let me know what you think and enjoy!
WARNING:(Their maybe mistakes!)