WATTYS WINNER 2020
Two interconnected murders, 64 years apart. One woman's search for truth and identity.
Readers' comments: 'a masterpiece', 'impeccably written', 'amazing', 'superbly crafted page-turner', 'hauntingly beautiful', 'tremendous plot and character development', 'one of a kind', 'fantastic story telling', 'loved this book', 'a wonderful read", 'absolutely beautiful', 'brought tears to my eyes' and many more
Wattys judging panel: 'This is VERY good. We were HOOKED from the beginning, and the writing and plot hold up throughout. This is a very unique, polished, well-written and well-researched piece.'
Plot
Set partly in rural England, partly on the sun-kissed coast of southerm Italy, The Painted Altar is a murder mystery mixed with romantic and historical elements (World War Two). Given away at two days old, Mary Rice has spent her life in the shadows. When discovering the suspicious circumstances surrounding her biological mother's death, she embarks on a journey which will shine a light not only on the truth but also on her own identity.
Brief extract
Suddenly, the door had inched open, half a wrinkled face visible behind the tautened chain.
"Hello. Who is it?"
The words I was going to say had of course been well-rehearsed, repeated over and over in my mind like a mantra, but now that the moment had arrived I found myself struggling to remember them.
"Mrs Harvey... I think that you might... well, that you might be..."
The door closed, then slowly opened once more, the chain this time unlatched. And there she was before me - half a metre away, within arm's reach. Thin lips gradually crooking upwards at each corner like the slow beatific kindling of a summer's dawn.
"Oh yes love, I know who you are."
Length: 70,000 words
About the author: Originally from England but for the last 16 years I've been living in Italy. I hope therefore that the Italian aspects of the novel will have a certain gloss of authenticity.
Part I - Dystopia
Dystopia(noun) - an imagined state or society in which there is great suffering or injustice, typically one that is totalitarian or post-apocalyptic.
When young Russia learned that word, he laughed. Wasn't that the way things were all the time? Didn't the strong, power-hungry countries with the authority start arguments and break laws, making life miserable and intolerable for the weak?
Russia was content with living in a world full of disagreements as long as he was safe, but when a massive war started by a certain superpower shattered his life into millions of pieces, his point of view was not quite the same as before. As unstable alliances are reconstructed, as narratives are revealed, and as uncertain realization hits, Russia gets the feeling that this certain superpower may not be so far away from him, and maybe, just maybe, that superpower may be the key to returning to the world before the war.
- Please note that this Wattpad piece was made for entertainement purposes only! None of the characters in the story are made to actually represent their country, but some of them may be stereotypic or typical.
- Some parts of the story may be historically or politically inaccurate! I am trying my best to make things work, but some things were hard to put into the piece.
- This piece may contain slight swearing or foul language, but it does not contain NSFW content.
- English is not my first language! I apologize for all the grammar and/or vocabulary mistakes I make along the way.
- A South Korean student is writing this! I'm so sorry about the late updates.