the colour of your mind

the colour of your mind

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Black. All he saw was black. It was so powerful that even moving a finger was impossible, it had complete control over him, almost as if an invisible force was pinning him down. He needed something to grip onto, as if to not slip away. As if on queue, the floor in front of him cracked and made a spark of light emerge in his line of vision. He took hold of that light and used it to pull him back to reality. WARNING This contains: Some minor swearwords Some minor abuse in the beginning NOT A BOOK This is an experiment! I have writersblock and someone recommended that I should try and post something and see if that gives me ideas/motivation etc. This is the first chapter of a book I've wanted to write for a long time but I can't seem to get past chapter 3. Feel free to read, and if this gets some amount of recognition I might publish chapter 2. Who knows, if this god-awful writers block leaves now I might publish an entire book. (No promises)
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As the narrator, I'm tempted to simply write "Middle Finger" because that is essentially what you'll feel like I'm giving you in telling this story. However, for the sake of not being a complete dick, I'll write a little more than just a description of a disrespectful gesture. This story can aptly be described as crude and deranged. As you may have surmised, a crazy person will be telling this story, and the characters involved are indeed also all crazy in their own special ways. So, given this exercise in mental illness, the topics touched on (in no particular order) in this tale are destruction, death, superpowered wackos, torture, pain, loneliness, chaos, the will to survive, never giving up, giving up and not giving a shit, the desire to protect, failing to protect and causing more trouble than was already present, disappointing and/or abusive parental figures, bullies, unjust punishments, just punishments, racism, violent and usually superpowered fights, sci-fi gadgets, bitterness, sarcasm, twisted and demented comedy, control or lack thereof, weird and awkward high school drama, lies and brainwashing, alien aggression, moral ambiguity, unhinged villains, fantastical weapons, a piece of shit main character, conditional friendship, a fuck load of musical references, anger, fear, depression, extra-dimensional creatures, godly powers, various esoteric connections, pop culture references, and of course, in general, superpowers.

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