Sylph of the Sky, Flower of the Earth

A short Cagney x Hilda short, expected around 10 parts, finished 02/22/18. Please tell me if there are any grammar or spelling mistakes.
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Cagney couldn't sleep, not now at least. Today was the day before the one year anniversary of the day that Cuphead and Mugman destroyed their contracts. The day he sold his soul was one of (if not the), most traumatizing days of the carnation's life. Though the memory was a bit fuzzed, he could remember the devil's cackling accompanied by the burning in his...stem.
Cagney slithered out from the oak tree he was under to get a better view of the night sky; the cackling of Hilda Berg could be heard. Hilda Berg was a friend, and a fellow former debtor. Truthfully Cagney wasn't sure on his feelings for her, sometimes they'd argue over the simplest of things, other times he could rest and count on her for company, accompanied by a snarky comeback every now and then. Cagney knew he would never admit it, but he truly admired both Hilda and the night sky above him. The stars always shined so bright, it was funny to think that he rarely got to see this world due to his need for sunlight. Cagney closed his eyes and let his vision get blurry, the last thing he saw were the glistening stars.

-@@@- means Cagney
-***- means Hilda
-uuu- means Mugman
-ccc- means Cuphead