Picture "Perfect"
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  • Reads 194
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  • Parts 15
  • Time 1h 12m
Ongoing, First published Jan 02, 2018
"She's so pretty"

"Her curves are to die for"

"Can I just be her?"

"Why can't I look like her"

"Her life is so put together...it's so perfect
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Melody Marie Valatino has been called many things but Perfect is an understatement. You would think she is fine with people thinking she is, looks and overall is perfect but she's not. Because it's not true. 

Being raped at 14 is not perfect. Watching your own father get murdered at 13 is not perfect. Having your mother blame it on you ever since is not perfect. Your twin was killed at 3,  that's messed up not perfect at all. But looks say more then words. 

Ever since her father died she has only been training. Now the person she calls mom is engaged and she has to move with her mom but her gang is going with her. Yes gang, she turned cold hearted ever since her dad died. But what happens when she meets Austin... She falls in love of course. WRONG. He has to try. Try real hard. She didn't think she would get close to him but when she meets his bestfriend things go down hill from there.

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A-"I want you, all of you"


M-"You already have me"
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