Picture "Perfect"
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  • Reads 194
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  • Parts 15
  • Time 1h 12m
Ongoing, First published Jan 02, 2018
"She's so pretty"

"Her curves are to die for"

"Can I just be her?"

"Why can't I look like her"

"Her life is so put together...it's so perfect
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Melody Marie Valatino has been called many things but Perfect is an understatement. You would think she is fine with people thinking she is, looks and overall is perfect but she's not. Because it's not true. 

Being raped at 14 is not perfect. Watching your own father get murdered at 13 is not perfect. Having your mother blame it on you ever since is not perfect. Your twin was killed at 3,  that's messed up not perfect at all. But looks say more then words. 

Ever since her father died she has only been training. Now the person she calls mom is engaged and she has to move with her mom but her gang is going with her. Yes gang, she turned cold hearted ever since her dad died. But what happens when she meets Austin... She falls in love of course. WRONG. He has to try. Try real hard. She didn't think she would get close to him but when she meets his bestfriend things go down hill from there.

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A-"I want you, all of you"


M-"You already have me"
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75 parts Complete Mature

"Mels I think we should break up" David said to her, his voice flat, no emotion, as though he wasn't blowing up her entire world with his blunt words. "What?" Melody asked, her face had gone pale, she had heard the words he said the first time but she couldn't believe it. She loved him and he loved her, why would they break up? Why would he want this? David was the love of her life, he was athletic and popular, and made her feel special. He had been pressuring her to give in and have sex with him, but she needed a little more time to feel ready. She was almost ready, she had planned for them to make love the last night she was here before she moved away, then they would go long distance until she finished highschool and could legally move out to be with him without her mom interfering. She thought it was a perfect plan, but apparently David disagreed. Their lives weren't going to overlap anymore. Was that all she was to him? A convenient overlap? Her parents broke up, followed by sudden announcement her and her mother would be moving across the country, then David breaking her heart. Everything was disrupted everything in Melody's life had crumbled around her. Turns out there are even more surprises on the horizon, is Melody ready to accept all these changes or will it all be too much? Part one complete. Part two complete. May 2023. Umm wow. Over 200k reads now. Thank you so much! I am so thrilled by every like and comment. Thank you so much for enjoying my story. Thank you! Be kind and make choices that make you happy friends.