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Tropes: Childhood friends to lovers, Soulmates, Twin Flames, she falls first but he falls harder (or is that the case . . .), you complete me, Tragic past, Dark Fairytale šš©š¤š§š® š¼ššØš©ššš©šš https://pin.it/57WqdWXHE (copy and pasteš©·) šš¤š£š š„š”šš®š”ššØš© I found - Amber Run Panic Room - Au/Ra I'm a Mess - Bebe Rexha Lose my Mind - Dean Lewis Monster - Eminem Ft. Rihanna Demons - Imagine Dragons Experience - Ludovico Einaudi Map - Maroon 5 Fire on Fire - Sam Smith Where's my Love - SYML How to Save a Life - The Fray Dusk till Dawn - Zayn ft Sia š²ššš šÆšššššššš She is your typical sunshine. All bright smiles and big personalities - or at least that is what she shows to everyone else besides herself. The only person who see's her dark thoughts, numbed feelings, and painful days was him. But after her father was found to be the traitor of the Yakuza organization in the States, she is immediately labelled as the traitors daughter. An enemy, a scum. With a mother battling wit health issues, a younger sister to provide for, she begs for mercy. š¹šššššš šŗššššššššš The person the world sees is cold, manipulative, apathetic man who was the next leader of the Yakuza Organization of the states. He was seen as emotionless, even those close to him. Naturally, everyone expected him to get rid of the traitor's family. Except he didn't. He has emotions, but hides them. But there was one person who knew him better than he did and couldn't apply his logic to . . . Her. So what happens when a girl who feels too much and a boy who pretends to feels very little fall for each other and find that they complete each other when their situations pulls them apart?
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your majesty ā oc book 4.0
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"It's not like I didn't want to be the monster; it's just because the game itself seemed incredibly one-sided and unfair. Heroes and monsters is just a game based on kids' TV shows. Everyone's free to choose what role they play. But me . . . . . I was friendless, always with a dark cloud above. Everyone knew who the hero was going to be. I didn't stand a chance in hell. naturally, there was no scenario where the monster would ever win. I was always a loser! The popular kid always beats up the little guy that no one likes. That's just the way the world works. Screw justice. . . And screw evil too. . . I'm going to be killed simply because that's what everyone else wants? I can't stand it! It pisses me off! I'm going to make them understand one way or the other. I'm here to for underdogs everywhere. Good? Evil? I REJECT THEM BOTH!" This is my second story ever so please don't be harsh, if I randomly take a month of break then please just bear with me, my laziness hasl a hold on me that you could never understand. I love you. I do not own one piece, I do not own one punch man. Any R I use will be credited to the original creators.
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