The group

I haven't posted a lot yet. A few chapters to come next month. It's about a girl who has been in the hospital for most of her life and on recovering, befriends an outcast group and travels with them to discover the person she really is. Each chapter will be full of messages and self empowerment and motivation. Even though it isn't much at all please read it and give me any suggestions that come to mind which could help me with future chapters. I trust that I will write this to the best of my abilities and try to make the story original, different and very. Interesting. Open to constructive criticism of any sort.