A Criminal's Girl ( On Hold ! )
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  • Reads 779
  • Votes 25
  • Parts 2
  • Time 14m
Ongoing, First published Jun 09, 2012
I sat next to the door crying my eyes out froze in shock and fear! I looked at Ronica who was splatted in blood crying silently. He then started shifting the gun towards my mothers head. I started screaming and put an arm out barely screaming out a 'PLEASE NO'! He thought my movement was Ronica trying to make an attempt to attack him. With tears in his eyes he shot Ronica! My Eyes widened. I felt like I was in a movie and this was just a scene and everyone would be Ok but it wasn't, this was reality! He looked towards my way and let out a faint 'I'm sorry'.  Her face was horrified, and then it all happened... It was like it was in slow-motion!
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When Jane Madarang's neighbor Natalie kills herself and leaves behind cryptic instructions, it's up to Jane and her classmates to unearth deadly secrets. ***** Natalie Driscoll is dead. She threw herself out a window and left her neighbor Jane to unravel their town's darkest secrets. Following Natalie's instructions leads Jane to three other high school students who all have something to hide. The four of them must carry out Natalie's final errand while solving the mysteries written in her diary. But the secrets they unearth may be far more dangerous than what they ever imagined. Content and/or trigger warning: This story contains scenes of suicide, violence and murder that may be triggering for some readers. [[word count: 100,000-150,000 words]]