|~Criticando a Rayita~|
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¿Alguna vez has pensado porqué esta Rayita es cómo es?
¿Por qué puede llegar a ser tan estúpida?
Bueno, en este aquí hablaremos un poco de las idioteces de esta shika :v
Eres libre de dejar una crítica hacia rayita a través de los comentarios si quieres que salga dentro del libro. Me dices si te dejo anónimo o no :)
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No preguntes por las idioteces que escribo :v
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