beautiful darkness
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"I open my eyes.
The door is open.
The door is open. But nothing happened.
I hesitantly walk to the door feeling sore all over. From the crack in the door I can see that this time there might actually be something behind the door.
I don't hesitate pulling it open and come face to face with the most beautiful sight. It wasn't a door. It was a cover for the door-sized window keeping a barrier between me and them.
Stars shine making the darkness a little less dark and lonely. There is no ground. Stars and darkness are the only thing I can see.
I have no idea of how long I was gaping at the most beautiful sight I've seen my entire life.
It's like staring into my own piece of beautiful darkness.
Suddenly I can remember everything."
***
This is the first story I'm posting, so bear with me.
I wrote this story for an English assignment and I'm really proud of it to be honest.
I've also wanted to post for a really long time but I've been really scared. BUT since I got a good feeling writing this I thought why not.
This was all just too much information, I'm sorry lol.
So here we go, my first story on here, my introduction to the writing section.
I hope you enjoy!
-AM
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