Error
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  • Parts 8
  • Time 1h 22m
Ongoing, First published Mar 08, 2014
How would you react if you were branded as an "Error"; as inhumane, as a mistake. At age sixteen, every teen undergoes a Procedure that removes a section of their prefrontal cortex; the part of the brain that stimulates creativity and imagination, to ultimately eliminate crime and create a more perfect nation. Every once in a while, there is a problem with the Procedure; something goes wrong, and an Error is born. The government has zero tolerance for Errors and the minute one is found out, they are sent to a Lab to be tested on until death or killed instantly; after all, they're not humans anymore, just mistakes. Rosalie (Ross) Iverson has been against the Procedure since the day she mentally lost her brother to it. The exact opposite of Ross is Caleb Mackswell, the prodigy of the state and the next in line to lead the nation. No matter how their lives were before, neither Ross, nor Caleb could have predicted what the Procedure would throw at them.
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