Blue Moon
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Science Fiction
Follow the story of three persons. All with a different aspect in what they see and hear. Please read and give me commentary! Help me improve my story. Tell me if you guys want more! (:
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This is a short story I've just recently finished after a year and a half of hard work! I love this story to pieces and am looking for critique.

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