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When He Noticed Me
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Ongoing, First published Jan 10, 2018
Eveleah Halston, not your typical good girl, but still is one. Straight A's, but also captain of the Volleyball and Soccer team. Clueless as one can get, clumsy and downright childish.
Devyn Wynchestre, your typical Golden Boy, Jock, Player, you name it, it's him. He's intelligent, cunning, athletic, mysterious, sexy... what's not to like? Join the two as their lives entwine and their future uncovers hidden pasts.
"I know you love m-"
"Milk chocolate! Of course I do!"
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