So I am trying to write a fractured Fairy Tale- I really just want to get some feed back on the first page I wrote. The first book is a twist on Snow White and is actually going to be manly about the prince. I have been afraid to develop the story without knowing how well my writing and the story is. The story starts with the main character dying and is a reflection on his life, the series it will be about three books long. I hope you enjoy but if you don't, please give me feedback.All Rights Reserved