Falling Snow- Book 1 in the Failing Love Trilogy
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Ongoing, First published Jan 10, 2018
fallingsnow
So I am trying to write a fractured Fairy Tale- I really just want to get some feed back on the first page I wrote.  The first book is a twist on Snow White and is actually going to be manly about the prince.  I have been afraid to develop the story without knowing how well my writing and the story is. The story starts with the main character dying and is a reflection on his life, the series it will be about three books long. I  hope you enjoy but if you don't, please give me feedback.
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