Under Controllable
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  • Reads 160
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 23
  • Time 2h 18m
Ongoing, First published Jan 10, 2018
People say that you would die for your friends. Sometimes people take it too far, they would go to any limits just to save their family and friends. For someone like Kylie this does not mean a thing to her. What Kylie will soon find out is that she really would do anything for the people that she cares about and go even further for her family.
Using her abilities and the help of her new friends, she may be able to defeat who ever may get in their way. However, can she trust everyone she meets? Maybe she will find out how cruel the world can be and sometimes even family can be the most deceiving of this world's people. 
Can she live up to what everyone expects of her? Can she even save herself? Or is it all meaningless in the end? Will she give up on everything that she has been destined to do from the moment she was born?

Note: while this is not rated mature and has no pictures of what actually happens in the book, it still contains slight gore like whipping, limbs being crushed and i guess the most serious is cannibalism but that isn't even in this book so yeah.
(although i'm pretty young so i guess i just see it as really serious so i could be overestimating my own thoughts keyword: COULD!!!) so yeah i hope that will do as a warning.
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