Finding Hope.

Please read this and give me constructive critisism because I know a I have many things to fix starting with Christina's story, Siwons attitude toward Christina (because a good God loving man would not have this attitude toward a girl believe me) and maybe I should change the name of the male protaganist all together because I wrote this during my obsession with Super Junior. Don't get me wrong, Siwon is a great God loving man..but I need to stop with my obsession all together