Lost Turn
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Last published Thu, Mar 22, 2018
WARNING: This is a story that I'm creating with very little planning to exercise my creativty. There may exist a lot of plotholes that I may or may not go back and fix. Either way, if you do still plan to read this, from the bottom of my heart, thank you. I hope you're able to enjoy your time!
Lost Turn: Two nations in a small world named "Duolia" are engulfed in war. The goal? An artifact that holds immense power. The nations were once one nation in obtaining the artifact, but a rift began to form once the question of "what should we do with the artifact?" spread among the people. One side wanted to use the artifact's power to increase the quality of life on Duolia while the other side wanted to use its power to increase the strength of Duolia and expand to other planets. Thus, their single continent was split into two lands, The Kingdom of Elysia and the Republic of Exolio.
Comet, a young boy in the rural town of Terra grows up hearing stories of this artifact and watching his brother, Arma, going off to the military. He soon wants to go with his brother because he feels that he can help find the artifact (and mostly just so he can help keep his brother safe) He grows up in this town with his two best friends. Hime, a strong girl with a great princess impression and Mul, a shy boy who easily adapts to his surroundings... I'll just update this as the story progresses.
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