Sun-starved Leaves

One of the first completed stories that I've written. Please be nice, but helpful criticism is accepted!

Wet pavement,
Curving road
Rain outside
and in
Sharp turn
Biting cold
outside
and in
Taken too quickly
Thought too slow
Sun-starved leaves watch
on the side of the highway
Shiver
and
Burn
They see all
outside
and in
~