Pure Metal
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In Salogern everything is perfect and nothing works. Corruption upstairs is something usual. A complicated person lives in a reality where everyone tries to simplify everything, where art is vanishing and love is dying. He has only himself and some cents to survive and the idea of letting himself fall into the abyss seems everyday more tempting. I hope the insignificant beings angry with the world (or better with the mankind) will find a bit of hope and comfort, as I did, between the lines of my first adventure Bon voyage and good luck El It may contain bad language. Only completed chapters have been reviewed and edited. The others may contain errors and grammar scary monsters.
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Luis and his family recently moved to a new state. His favorite thing to do is play soccer. Everything soccer. There's struggles at home and struggles at school. Luis does whatever he can to make his family happy even if it's impossible. School is the same way full of racist and homophobic pricks. Still Luis blames himself. With one friend from the start and a crush on both team captains Luis doesn't know what to do next. He's scared and just wants to play soccer. "Why am I being punished for being born?" READ TAGS There is Spanish in this book. I am not proficient in Spanish nor am I a professional. If you think something is wrong comment nicely and I will fix it thank you

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