The Hole
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Last published Sun, Jan 14, 2018
A seemingly bottomless pit was found, for which the depth cannot be determined. Over time, people began using it to illegally dump trash. Many have jumped in to commit suicide. Others jump believing they'll find life's answers within it. Today, we find out the truth about the hole. (writing prompt, I did not come up with it)
note: this is my first story, so please forgive minor mistake and I am open to constructive criticism!
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