This is my first completed story even if it is a short story. And....I need you, the readers, to give me brutal honesty so comment if you like it or not. I just need to know if it is horrible.
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Ok, so I hated my other story, but I'm hoping this one will be better! I've never written an "X Reader" Story before, so just tell me if it sucks. I really don't care about hate, but LOVE constructive criticism.