The Remembrance

The Remembrance

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What happens when you wish to break out of the chains and run far away? Can you find the courage to give up all that you have for only the hope that you might gain something far more important? This is just a vague story. Maybe it achieves a purpose, maybe it doesn't. Maybe the purpose of the story is to not have a purpose at all. Maybe it isn't even a story, but a assemblage of thoughts from a deep abyss somewhere in me. (Sorry my thoughts are always all over the place...maybe I can't give them a shape, so don't be worried if you don't get it. Critics are invited to give their reviews, but please refrain from using words that might discourage me. Though I will try to see it as constructive criticism, but utilizing bad language is not welcome. I wrote this when I was 14, and I just wanted to put it out there to see what it may mean to people. Thanks to all the great souls who chose to read this short story. I may not guarantee that you will take something from here, but I can assure you that you are leaving something behind :) )
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Through thick and thin the Law shall prevail. A new sense of purpose awaits us, children of light, in the land where it all began. The darkness in which we once cowered in fear, now curbed by the might of our endless light. Come, brothers, come, sisters. Let there be peace among the wicked, just as the Law dictates. Peace and certainty is all that you have ever longed for, little angel. A bright, stable future. A roof without holes above thy head. Acknowledgement and recognition of thy existence, feverish dreams of grandeur. Greed born from yearning, treacherous vines of rapacity taint your innocent soul. You seek a future that does not exist. Let thy fingers hold the fragile line between dream and nightmare. Let thy light navigate the path. Shall thee give in and falter, O' land of old, envelop his body in thy unending flame of chaos. Spit out nothing but an empty husk, the remnants of a smile once so bright. Shall thee prevail, O', Great Kazdel, I ask of you, the impossible - take mercy on the innocent. Don't let the radiance dim and don't let the mind turn bleak. Wake, young traveler. Bid thy farewells and burn thy bridges. It's time to say goodbye, curly head. Cross post from AO3. For a shorter and more on-point description, look no further! I had something silly written up before throwing it out in exchange for that wall of text upstairs. It's a little story "about a young, dumb sankta who's been dealt a bad hand at life, looking for his place in all this mess. The pointless search for a better future leads him far, far away from home, to a country forever ravaged by war and misery - Kazdel, the promised land where devils roam free and peace feels out of place." Anyway, it's quite lengthy, but hopefully enjoyable? Slide a comment if you want, I'll give you a tiny kiss on the forehead. Man, do I love comments. (Lastly, to point out, English is not my native language, but I don't think it'll be much of an issue ;3)

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