Promise
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  • Parts 28
  • Time 2h 44m
Complete, First published Jan 21, 2018
She refused to show mercy. She refused to die in this world of monstrosities.

Maybe that's why she became what she was,

They call her Seventeen.

She was lethal, deadly even. But under that ruthless facade is a young girl, a girl scared that the world would let her down once again. Ever wondered why she became what she was? Three people broke their promise, causing her to spend 2 years shrouded in darkness. And so darkness she became

Ethan King, the leader of the most feared gang in the world, Dark Hurricanes. He was ruthless, cruel, cold. Nobody but his second and third in command could understand his ways, his reputation was matched only by Seventeen herself. He just took over the gang for 6 months and everybody fears him. People far and wide have heard of him.

The Duels are coming nearer each and every day. It is held once every five years to determine the ranking of gangs. It just so happens that the Death Scars and Dark Hurricanes are taking part this year once again, with new members.

What happens when Ethan sees a girl whose arms are littered with scars walk through the gates to the place where The Duels are going to be held?

What happens when Seventeen sees a childhood Friend that she never wanted to see in her life again?

Two teens equally broken in every way, their eyes seeing enough of the world's horrors. What happens if they clash? Will sparks ignite or will each of them become more broken than they were before. After all what have they got to loose? 

"In the end, we're only human, we cry, we laugh, we smile, we make mistakes."
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It's been five years since Alice saw the outside world. She's been trapped in many cells, as they moved her across the U.S. to find new people to turn into bloodsuckers so they can rebuild their clan. As well as covering up the murders done by the newborn vampires. They were the new generation of hybrids and test subjects. Kane used his and Alice's blood to turn humans and other creatures into blood-sucking killers. Through all the hardships Alice has suffered over the years, she finds comfort in a newly formed friendship. Sophia is the only clan member Alice talks to. Not that it bothered her to stay silent, after all, Alice had spent most of her life in silence, up until recently that is. It wasn't like she had another option. Sophia is the only friend she has now because they took her away from Anna and Tate. Alice misses them a lot, and dreams about them often. She just wishes she knew if they felt the same. Alice knew it was easier to find Anna because they wanted her to find her. However, she hoped that they would've come for her by now. If anyone could save her, it had to be herself. With the help of Sophia, who also wanted out of the clan, they had been planning to escape. They could only hope they were ready for what was to come. Things are different now. Alice was different. In a way, she felt more powerful, yet drained at the same time. All she knew was that blood would be shed, once she is free from her prison. They will pay for what they did. She knew the first place they would look for Alice was her hometown. This means she needs to get there fast to find the others, and put many miles between them and those who would hunt her down. Just until they end this once and for all.