I wrote this scene almost 20 years ago, after a weekend of camping. I was walking home from school and wrote it out in about 5 minutes. I use the term maddening quite a bit and I am planning on a rewrite once I determine a proper storyline to support it.
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It's unedited and hard to follow at times Lol. I may end up rewriting it entirely since it's weirdly written. It'll probably be fully edited by September '21.