Hasta que Cierre mis Ojos

Hasta que Cierre mis Ojos

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Romance
No siempre las cosas salen como queremos, estoy acostumbrado a dar mucho y no recibir nada, me canse de ser el consuelo cuando estas sola, pero cuando yo te necesito no estas ahí. Me querías por necesidad, no por amor. Fui quien te escuchaba, te aconsejaba, pero tu ignorabas como me sentía. Supuse que eras para mi porque tenias todo lo que yo buscaba, pero las cosas NO SIEMPRE SALEN COMO QUEREMOS, yo quería que merecieras mi amor pero por tu parte preferiste usarme en vez de tratar de amarme como yo lo hice, si, la culpa fue mía por esperar tanto de alguien que jamas me prometió nada, pero igual seguí ahí, nunca te falle, mientras tu me fallabas siempre... "Si amas no traiciones, si mientes no ilusiones" ********** Hola, aquí el Poeta Oscuro. Esta es una historia algo corta (Y muy sad), cabe decir que es mi primer libro, así que acepto criticas constructivas y si hay algún tipo de error gramatical, por favor, díganmelo en los comentarios.
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