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Gifted - SERIOUS EDITING, REVISION, and other writer stuff GOING ON!

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Time 2h 6m

bethany_mcalister

action agent gifted mystery spy suspense teen-fiction

"16 years old?"  He laughed maliciously as he stood across the deck.  "Why are you so hard to kill?" Snapping at me I could tell he was growing impatient and angry. But what could I do, I'm nothing special? He's right, I'm only 16 years old. Nothing more than a girl with no one.   "I guess I'm just gifted."   BANG goes the gun.



I recommend not reading this until I've figured my stuff out! Go ahead and add it to your reading list or library, or go ahead and read what I have so far! It probably won't change that much, but I'm doing some serious plot revisions and chapter changes because I didn't like where the story was going! Feel free to read what I have so far and if you like it, GREAT! The characters stay the same and the whole conflict, but how the conflict is discovered, resolved, and character motives, might change! 

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The Agent's Priority by -Dreamwrote-

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