Down by the water

so this is a chapter in a book in writing. I'm posting it to see what people think. yes, it's a sex scene between my main character and her boyfriend. read at your own discretion. first a bit of background. my characters names are Xavier Riona, or X a half human half Zarman and her longtime boyfriend, Marko Durham, a human but not born to earth. the setting is an alien planet called Zarma, this was my main character's father's home planet. its known for its vast seas and culture. the culture of this planets native people is like a fishing/ farming based Appalachian culture, so very old folk. my main character was not raised on this planet she was raised on earth, which is now a barren wasteland much like the setting of Madmax. So needless to say the ocean and sea are very important to both my characters. now enjoy this lovely little sex scene. and feel free to comment!