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Après le concours, le book de critiques ! 

Donc dans ce book, je vous donnerai mon avis sur vos histoires Wattpad.  Que vous ayez 1 vue ou 1 million, je pense qu'on a toujours besoin d'avis. Après, ne vous attendez pas à un avis qui va vous brosser dans le sens du poils. Clairement pas. Je suis là pour soulever les erreurs, les incohérences et les maladresses. Bien sûr, il y aura du positif. Simplement, il n'y aura pas QUE ça. 

Je suis un tigre, pas un chaton....
PS : Je serais en pause du 6 avril au 15 Juillet en raison du concours que j'organise !All Rights Reserved

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🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 - ✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 by RoseStar714

🖐️ Hi ! 🎀 Rose 💖 is here 😄 Get ready for awesome adventure and amazing journeys 😉 As the book already said that 🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 -✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 [COMPLETED ✅ ✍️] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ 'Let's Get Lost Into The Stars'. 'Let's Do A Lot Of Fun'. 'Amazing Adventures Story'. 'Read Till The Very End'. Eight good friends one day met up with each other by an awkward coincidence. An unknown and unnatural situation blocked them to return back where they were supposed to go 🤔 A mysterious white aura light guided them to a time portal. The eight teenage girls entered into the portal to discover new things and they went to many dimensions but can't find how they'll return back to their own world 😐 But they don't know what will waiting for all of them. They're going to face some awesome and dangerous things. They will do some amazing journeys in the fantasy world and go through the time and dimensions. Will they still ALIVE?! What Will HAPPEN! 😧 Wait You Can See That! 😇 Some Mind-blowing Adventures you can see in thus story 🤫 But wait till the story begins ✋ I'm new on Wattpad inspired by my one friend's story (My Random Things Book By @Mariennetqueen) I found an idea of starting an Adventures Story of Teenage Girls 💗 Please support me. Vote ⭐ if you like 😋 and Comment 💬 on the story. With your support, through your words and comments I can know how I'm doing and I'll try to do more better 💓 I can learn some wonderful ideas so support! And please don't use wrong words in the story, through your comments 🙏 If you don't like, don't read this. You're feel free to correct my mistakes. Say in the comments what you want, I'll try my best to do it ✌️ I only have the ideas & the OCs here. Really thanks to my all Wattpad Friends for helping me with the story 💕 🤗 HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY!! (◔‿◔)(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。

Shawn Mendes Imagines [COMPLETED] by Sky_Power747

The title describes it all. Requests (except for dirty ones) are welcome. Have fun reading! // Le titre dit tout. Les demandes (à l'exception de avec un esprit tordu) sont les bienvenus. Bon lecture! *All imagines will only be in English // Les pensées sont seulement en Anglais **Updates are every (I don't know) days // Les mises à jour sont tous les (Je ne sais pas) jours ***This book contains more sad imagines than happy ones. I recommend you have a box of tissues ready, but you're always more than welcome to cry along :) // Ce livre contient imagine plus tristes que les heureux. Avoir une boîte de mouchoirs prêts.

Cherry || Andy Barber x Babysitter OC by youdontknowmegls

My goal for this summer was to get a job, earn some money, and go back to college. Just some extra cash to support my addiction to books and overpriced iced coffee. Babysitting for the Barbers seemed like the best idea: great family, nice kid and salary higher than the average. What could go wrong? He's married, my boss, and twice my age. Nothing screams forbidden more than our situation. Despite everything, we can't say no to temptation. 🍒 This is a 18+ fanfiction. You can find all trigger warnings in the prologue. Disclaimer: in this universe, Andy Barber is 42 and the FMC is 22. He is also married. *IN THIS AU THE EVENTS OF JACOB'S TRIAL DON'T TAKE PLACE*

dsmp angst oneshots by citystreets69420

there isnt enough ranboo angst on wattpad so ye NO SHIPPING RANBOO IS A MINOR. REQUESTS CLOSED Number 73 for ranbooangst: 1/24/21 Number 48 in selfharmawareness: 1/13/21 #2 for ladsontour:2/3/21 #4 for ranbooangst:2/3/21 Join my discord in my bio! so like this is mostly just mcyt angst on shots but im keeping it ranboo angst oneshots just for the bit :) 2.1k:2/3/21 3.08k:2/7/21 4.33k:2/16/21 5k:2/19/21 6.24k:2/22/21 8.71k:3/1/21 9.61k:3/2/21 15.9k:4/6/21 45k:8/20/21 50k:9/16/21 69k8/28/25

Hiccup x Reader (Race To The Edge) by Styla_Mythic

ANNOUNCEMENT: My HTTYD series is currently undergoing revisions. If things change while you are reading, I apologize for the inconvenience. Please have patience with me. This process takes a while and I'm currently working on other stories as well. But I hope to improve your experience overall, so it will be worth it in the end. Thank you for your support and patience! These are a bunch of one-shots that I wanted to do based on the Netflix 'Race To The Edge' series. A bunch of them will be off of real episodes and I may add some of my own episode ideas in. All of these one-shots will be strung together as if they were actual episodes. (Cover art made by @IvoCharles and once again I give thanks to this person cause that is so awesome!)

Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique" by Pita_the_Bread

Here you'll learn how to become a master of the art of writing fanfiction. These tutorials are 100% approved by the Herd mentality that poisons this platform. Rest assured! I guarantee you'll become one of the most esteemed writers around here, with ideas never seen before...well... except the other few hundreds that do the same stuff. BOTTOM LINE! Follow this guide and you too can become the most bland and unoriginal guy on Wattpad. You're welcome! Disclaimer:SARCASM in pula mea! Do not take this seriously! And yes, I'm making a parody after a channel of the same name on YouTube.

𝐋𝐎𝐒𝐓 𝐈𝐍 𝐓𝐈𝐌𝐄 | 𝗥𝗘𝗩𝗘𝗥𝗦𝗘 𝟭𝟵𝟵𝟵 - 𝑴𝑨𝑳𝑬 𝑹𝑬𝑨𝑫𝑬𝑹 by Spongy449

[MALE READER IN REVERSE 1999] - 𝗦𝗟𝗢𝗪 𝗕𝗨𝗥𝗡 FANFIC "𝙏𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙣𝙤 𝙥𝙖𝙨𝙩, 𝙣𝙤 𝙛𝙪𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚, 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧𝙚 𝙞𝙨 𝙤𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙣𝙤𝙬" ---------------------✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸✸-------------------- It can be challenging to get used to the behaviour of the people in this era but it's important to remember that they are just trying to survive in their own unique way. You never know what they're going through, and a little kindness goes a long way. Time travelling can be quite an experience. It is fascinating to see how things were in the past. For instance, it may be difficult to understand why people behave in certain ways or communicate with different accents, like Ring. Therefore, keep an open mind and embrace the possibility of learning something new. With the right attitude and determination, one can navigate through these challenges and make the most out of this time travelling adventure. There are always those who do not seem to understand the gravity of the situation. Y/N may be an arcanist, or perhaps something else entirely. However, his disregard for the seriousness of time travel can have devastating consequences, and it is impossible to protect the timeline from his reckless behavior. Every decision he makes is like the butterfly's effect where a single flap can cause the 𝗧𝗲𝗺𝗽𝗲𝘀𝘁 on the other side of the world. So beware, for Y/N may be your saving grace... or the undoing of this universe as you know it. A massive 'What-if', when certain figures associated with 'The Storm' met the Timekeeper? [CONTENT WARNING: This story contains content such 𝗠𝘂𝗿𝗱𝗲𝗿, 𝗚𝗼𝗿𝗲, 𝗩𝗶𝗼𝗹𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲, 𝗦𝘁𝗿𝗼𝗻𝗴 𝗟𝗮𝗻𝗴𝘂𝗮𝗴𝗲, and 𝗦𝘂𝗶𝗰𝗶𝗱𝗲 which may inappropriate for some readers. Reader discretion is advised.] [ WORD COUNT - 800,000+ WORDS ]

Still us Still me? by hopoffthatgaintac

Yinyang got into an accident while auguring. This caused them to get hurt, leading them to the only one who could or would help them. They went to Testtube for help But Testtube found out something that interest her, that would cause them great pain, or cause others they know pain TW- GORE, VOMIT, DEATH, SH, AND MUCH MORE GRUESOME TOPICS ____________________________________________________________________________ Ok so this is my first fanfic and it's about Yinyang so >:3 Don't own any of these characters so ya (PLS DONT CLOWN ME FOR MY TYPOS I DONT PROOFREAD AND I USUALLY MAKE A CHAPTER WHILE HALF ASLEEP!)

The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) by paulapdx

🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊

Perfect Fate ✔ (Moved To Inkitt) by fanoshkaflippo

Wattpad Creator! Happy and proud. HIM: Staying the night? Not my thing. Hearts and flowers? Boring. Falling in love? Not anytime soon. Settling down? Off the table. Getting married? You're kidding me, right? That was me before the night we first met. Because, well, meeting a hot chick that made me hard just by looking at her was definitely not in my plans when I sneaked out of a woman's apartment after what was already a long night. Taking her home and getting her a chocolate cake, though, was kind of intentional. But falling for her? Boy, that was pretty much inevitable. HER: He came out of nowhere, literally. I was there, sitting on that bench, barefoot and crying and just getting my heart broken in peace and silence. Then he appeared, all mad and furious and sexy and tall and just drool-worthy! And just like that, despite my poor attempts of escaping him, he had me wrapped in his world. A crazy yet heart-fluttering world, that I have absolutely no intentions of leaving anytime soon. ------- Character development is a main theme in this book. It shows you how they both work on changing for the better, while trying to overcome the obstacles in their relationship and fight for each other till the end. ** Warning!! Some chapters contain sexual scenes, but there's always a warning at the head of the chapter. Do not read them if you're under 18.** * Also, please beware that this story contains a lot of swearing. Read at your own risk. * **I don't own any photos used in this book. All are found on the internet for public use.** Highest Rankings: Sexy - #1 Love - #1 General Fiction - #41 Romance - #46 ------ ** Copyright © 2014 by Fanoshka Flippo (Farah Fekry). All rights reserved. No part of this document may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without prior written permission of Fanoshka Flippo / Farah Fekry. **

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🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 - ✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 cover

Shawn Mendes Imagines [COMPLETED] cover

Cherry || Andy Barber x Babysitter OC cover

dsmp angst oneshots cover

Hiccup x Reader (Race To The Edge) cover

Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique" cover

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The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition) cover

Perfect Fate ✔ (Moved To Inkitt) cover

🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 - ✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍

🖐️ Hi ! 🎀 Rose 💖 is here 😄 Get ready for awesome adventure and amazing journeys 😉 As the book already said that 🎀 𝑭𝑶𝑹𝑬𝑽𝑬𝑹 𝑭𝑹𝑰𝑬𝑵𝑫𝑺 💖 -✌️For The Ages, Till The Very End 👍 [COMPLETED ✅ ✍️] (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ.✧ 'Let's Get Lost Into The Stars'. 'Let's Do A Lot Of Fun'. 'Amazing Adventures Story'. 'Read Till The Very End'. Eight good friends one day met up with each other by an awkward coincidence. An unknown and unnatural situation blocked them to return back where they were supposed to go 🤔 A mysterious white aura light guided them to a time portal. The eight teenage girls entered into the portal to discover new things and they went to many dimensions but can't find how they'll return back to their own world 😐 But they don't know what will waiting for all of them. They're going to face some awesome and dangerous things. They will do some amazing journeys in the fantasy world and go through the time and dimensions. Will they still ALIVE?! What Will HAPPEN! 😧 Wait You Can See That! 😇 Some Mind-blowing Adventures you can see in thus story 🤫 But wait till the story begins ✋ I'm new on Wattpad inspired by my one friend's story (My Random Things Book By @Mariennetqueen) I found an idea of starting an Adventures Story of Teenage Girls 💗 Please support me. Vote ⭐ if you like 😋 and Comment 💬 on the story. With your support, through your words and comments I can know how I'm doing and I'll try to do more better 💓 I can learn some wonderful ideas so support! And please don't use wrong words in the story, through your comments 🙏 If you don't like, don't read this. You're feel free to correct my mistakes. Say in the comments what you want, I'll try my best to do it ✌️ I only have the ideas & the OCs here. Really thanks to my all Wattpad Friends for helping me with the story 💕 🤗 HOPE YOU'LL ENJOY!! (◔‿◔)(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧。