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Critiques [EN PAUSE]
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Après le concours, le book de critiques !
Donc dans ce book, je vous donnerai mon avis sur vos histoires Wattpad. Que vous ayez 1 vue ou 1 million, je pense qu'on a toujours besoin d'avis. Après, ne vous attendez pas à un avis qui va vous brosser dans le sens du poils. Clairement pas. Je suis là pour soulever les erreurs, les incohérences et les maladresses. Bien sûr, il y aura du positif. Simplement, il n'y aura pas QUE ça.
Je suis un tigre, pas un chaton....
PS : Je serais en pause du 6 avril au 15 Juillet en raison du concours que j'organise !
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