TECH AGE: Paragon D'Games

Story synopsis:

A story that takes place in a distant future where almost all the people are living inside the virtual world called "NEU-EARTH" but for a very few people like shino, this kind of living is fake.

technologies are highly advance and the lives of the people became so much better but for some reason.

Something is missing, shino ends up participating in this death game called paragon d'game. Everyone thought that this will be a MMORPG where they need to clear or finished the game in order to survive but. They are completely wrong!
The games that they will play are not this kind of game. It's much older, it's from 90's and 20's games that can be considered as 'stone age' in this kind of era.

In short the game they will play are those popular outdoor games that the 90's kids played like kick in the can, hide and seek etc. But deadly!.

It's time for some bone crashing and organ exploding in this outdoor games from 90's how many do you think will survive?

Hello guys! **)/ this is Ankou and this is my first story. As you can see Im a newbie and still have a long way to go. I'm still struggling in grammar But I hope you enjoy my story.
Please give me your opinion and ADVICE for me to improve.
Oh yeah and please be easy on me XD I have a weak heart so I appreciate if you put flowery words on the insult or something haha.

Thanks for reading and enjoy :)