The Deal That Never Existed

The Deal That Never Existed

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!Warning! Injuries and Blood contains in these very dark theories and Details of injuries. If you are not comfortable with it please leave. If you wish to continue it's your choice. You have been warned! ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A Story of a certain detective....A Female Detective... She has gone through a lot yet no one knows her true pain behind that smile of hers. She has witnessed her Best friend. No.... Her Sister get killed in front of her. She blames herself for her death. Soon she goes through a wrong path as she makes a deal. A Deal...... A Deal. That. Would. Change. Her. Life. She never though of it through not knowing what she has gotten her self into. When she did it was too late so she continued on with her life.... But it would never be the same...She knew that very well..... What she didn't know..... was... The. Truth. All her friends one by one gets hurt almost being fatal. They were carried away to the hospital leaving her alone to think. It was then something interesting happened. Something you would never thought would happen in your life. The Truth. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Help... I don't want to learn the truth...I didn't want to... This isn't my words... LET ME GO BACK!!! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I Don't own the Character Thomas Nor the story Sherlock Holmes. The pictures I use aren't mine and belong to there rightful owners. Unless I say I drew them. I Own the characters and the plot line. The cover was made by me so don't worry. I hope you enjoy the story.
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"Talk to you about it?" I asked with a dark laugh. "it's not as easy as you make it sound," "Yes, Garret! Talking! You know what that is right? It's very easy! You just open your mouth and let the words that are in your head, come out of your mouth." "It's not that simple," I fought down emotions that were building up. "Yes, it is! See, i'm doing it right now!" "No-it's not!" "Yes!" "No!" "Yes! just talk, dang it!-" "You just expect it to be easy to talk about my dead parents?! About how guilty I feel for not visiting their grave for the past 11 years?! I didn't even realize how long it's been, I had pretty much forgotten about them for 11 years! Do you know what kind of guilt is eating at me right now!" I shouted in angst, my hands grabbing at the clothes on top of my head and pushing it into myself, wanting to just be shielded away from everything I was feeling, guilt, sadness, from thinking about more people I've lost in my life. Before I could even react, Keeley's tiny arms wrapped themselves around my torso. ~ 
Garret had a difficult life. His parent's died when he was 10, and he got moved around for 4 year's in foster care. He finally find's a home where he feels like he's family, He has a mom, dad and a brother. 4 years later things happen and everything start's to go wrong. People die and people you thought you knew show a whole different side. Garret finds himself distancing from everybody. Because if he's not close to anybody, they cant get hurt. Right? 
One day while at a fight he runs into Keeley, who is a spirited and confident little fireball. when they met it left an impression on Garret, soon he finds himself wanting to know her more. and soon, he find's himself falling for her. 
Everyone Garret's ever loved has died, has gotten hurt, or stabbed him in the back.will he be able to trust her enough to let her close,or push her away to keep them both from getting hurt? © 2013

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