Louis secret twin

Louis secret twin

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Hi I'm Darcy Tomlinson and yes I am Louis Tomlinson's twin. The only difference is im female and hes male. when our mum and dad got divorced we were only 1 and they had a big argument over us. mum wanted us together and dad wanted at least one of us, so dad got me. Now you're probably wondering 'why hasn't this been found out by press' or 'why arent you famous' well, because we were only so little Louis doesn't remember anything of the sort, I only know all this because dad thought it would be the best for me to know everything. I always knew something wasn't right when I talked about what it would be like if I had siblings. It completely changed the mood and dad would shut off and get angry so I thought it would be best to leave it. Eventually, Dad told me that he felt guilty about keeping it from me and that it was so hard to keep it from me because of how close we were, so he told me. It's weird having a twin, even weirder not knowing him and him being so famous but I gotta keep going on. Anyway, here's my story.
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They judge her by the way she acts, the way she looks, and the way she dresses. She's all alone, and she's ok with that. No one cares about her, and it's been that way all along. Until Louis Tomlinson comes into her life, and shows her that she actually means something. To him, and everyone else. This is my first real fanfic and I started it when I was 13 so you can judge it if you want. I realize now that I wasn't a very good writer back then. Trust me though, you can see as I get better/older as it goes on. I think the last 30/20 chapters are a big improvement in comparison to the beginning. I started "Innocent" as a 13 year old and finished it as a 17 year old, and you can tell. If there are any cringe mistakes feel free to point them out. Whenever I read this I feel annoyed at myself cause of all the mistakes and I'm too lazy to fix and locate SO MANY of them. I can't decide on a cover so it may look different over time

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