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Críticas [ABIERTO]
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Eres un escritor que llego a esta plataforma para dar a conocer tu talento de escritura, pero...
¿Como sabes si vas bien?
¿Como sabes que a tus lectores les gusta?
¿Como sabes si tu trabajo va por buen camino?
¿Eres realmente un gran escritor?
Entra sin pena ni miedo, aquí no te vamos a tirar del titanic
Aquí te guiamos con paso firme
Te damos criticas constructivas para que mejores
¡Y uno que otro detalle!
¿Que esperas a entrar?
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