The Beginning
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Last published Fri, Feb 2, 2018
I'm working on a story and would like some feedback. Comments and criticisms are welcome.
Taken from her family when she was two, Katie works with the others who were taken to get away. Lost not knowing where they are, these children have to find a way safety. Their captors put them through a series of tests. Will these children pass or will they fail?
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