Clock Work (short story)

Clock Work (short story)

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Clock Work is a short story i wrote for class a couple years ago. I cant remember the exact prompt but the point of the story is to surprise the reader at the end without cheating them of details. So things can have subtle hints without telling you what really going on. Sadly the version i typed and turned in (and got an A for) had coffee split all over it by my teacher. I being so smart do not have the finished draft on my computer or any where else. So this is based of my rough draft i still have. I feel it is lacking compared to the one i turned in, but for the life of me cant remember the changes i made. If you do not pick up on the unexpected feel free to ask me. :)
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Note from MC: Stop. Do not read this story. It was written by a 13-year-old girl who really needed a reality check. Legit, the amount of embarrassment I have for this story is innumerable, so please just... no. "I'm abused by my dad. So what? Are you going to save me? Are you going to miraculously take me away from him? Didn't think so. Stay out of my business, Mr. Carter. I can handle myself," I snapped. He was really starting to get annoying with all these questions. Couldn't he take a hint? He leaned down, getting into my personal space again, and stared into my eyes. "You're fifteen, Deserae; you can't handle yourself. And to answer your question: Yes, I am going to save you. With or without your permission." And he walked away. Leaving me stunned, confused, and breathless. As always. *I WAS ONLY 13ISH WHEN I WROTE THIS, SO IT'S IN NEED OF EDITING THAT I WILL NEVER DO. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED*

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