Clock Work (short story)

Clock Work is a short story i wrote for class a couple years ago. I cant remember the exact prompt but the point of the story is to surprise the reader at the end without cheating them of details. So things can have subtle hints without telling you what really going on.

Sadly the version i typed and turned in (and got an A for) had coffee split all over it by my teacher. I being so smart do not have the finished draft on my computer or any where else. So this is based of my rough draft i still have. I feel it is lacking compared to the one i turned in, but for the life of me cant remember the changes i made. If you do not pick up on the unexpected feel free to ask me. :)