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My Immortal: Revised and Edited

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A bunch of middle schoolers decided that My Immortal: The Original is really, really bad.

So they fixed it.

People are credited by chapter. Mature rating because for the most part, we kept the content that same. That means that the sex scenes went from looking like a kindergartener wrote them to looking like a middle schooler wrote them. 

(Warning: Sexual Content)All Rights Reserved

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Complications (D.M +18) by dracomalfoywho

Elle Dawson and Draco Malfoy are sharing the same friend group, but that doesn't make them friends, not even close. Cedric Diggory, Elle's boyfriend, gets in a fight with her which brings her a little too close with Draco. Months have passed when one of Voldemort's followers kills Cedric while he was working on his last task in the Triwizard Tournament. What is going to happen between Elle and Draco? ****************** When we all left the room, a hand grabbed my arm and brought me to an empty classroom. Malfoy. "What do you want?" I huff. Before I can process anything he pins me at the wall,once again, his hand on my neck. I can feel his cold rings touching my skin. "You and Diggory huh? It hasn't even been 2 hours since you were on your knees for me" His grip tightens. "I didn't know if you wanted them to know" I explain. "So what? Now you are going to let them believe that these marks belong to the Hufflepuff. I won't let it" He smirks. ****************** Edited version on ao3 (link in bio) This is the first book of the "Complicated" series!

Our Butterfly Effect - A Drarry Story by Cheshire-Maniac

This Is A Fanfiction About Draco Malfoy And Harry Potter. Read the sections at the bottom before choosing to read this story. Time travel AU with creature inheritances. Cover Isn't Mine And Neither Is The World Of Harry Potter, We All Know It Belongs To J.K. Rowling. A twisted take on my previous story Soulmates. The boys travel back in time after the Battle of Hogwarts happens in their original timeline. In this they find out that everything before wasn't as it seemed. They keep their original memories as well so mentally they're technically adults but physically they are children. They will be children. Honestly, this will have a ton of triggering scenes and inappropriate language that's all I'm going to say. As of the second chapter something is implied but not mentioned. Just to clarify it is child abuse/rape. I will not have explicit scenes of it, but it may be referenced to in future chapters. I also will not consider smut scenes until the characters are at least 18 years old, just to ensure Wattpad will not remove this story because of underage characters. I am not sorry about that. PLEASE NOTE: I know what it's like to stop reading a fanfiction story because I suddenly lost interest. So, IF YOU DON'T LIKE THE STORY YOU CAN ALWAYS STOP READING. Sometimes I wonder what happened and go back to it, so if you get halfway through then decide not to finish it, I recommend putting it in a list, so you can find it later. IMPORTANT: I write then post, so this isn't planned out. There's little warnings because of that so if something does trigger you, I'm sorry for not warning you before you started to read the story. I will try and place triggers where I can for severe things like sex scenes (If I write it) or severe gore. I will and have warned you that this will have foul language.

𝐃𝐎𝐌𝐈𝐍𝐀𝐓𝐄 | 𝐃.𝐌 by ssickogirl

I breathe heavily and he grab a full fist of my hair and pull it back and his breath fanned my neck as he started to whisper, "Do you want me, Y/n?" He left kisses down my neck as I roll my hips. "Do you want me so bad?" He said softly. I closed my eyes and bit my lower lip as I nodded. "I want you." I whispered. "Please-" "I fucking like it when you beg for me." He chuckled out deeply. "Move your hips more." He whispered as his breath fanned my neck, and I feel the coolness when his breath fanned my neck after he left wet kisses. [ Year 6 ] draco × reader [COMPLETED STORY] ! This story contains mature stuff like sex ! ✰ the first few chapters are so not good, but the next chapters will get better and better ✰ this book is messy ngl, but i think I'll fix it in the future All the HP characters in this story belongs to jkr. Candace Cavecove and Noah Mason are mine. Book cover is by me.

Potions Class Gone Wrong -Harry Potter Fanfiction- by HP_and_PJ_nerd19568

Potions Class Gone Wrong -Harry Potter Fanfiction- (DON'T read this VERSION. It is STINKY and OLD. READ the NEW VERSION ***FESTINA TEMPUS*** It's mostly the same story, but with less plot holes, better transitions, less mistakes, etc etc etc. I HIGHLY recommend you read that version instead. It is COMPLETED and is the same story but BETTER! Give it some love!!) (Also available on AO3 and Fanfiction.net, check my bio) THERES EVEN A LINK TO THE FIRST CHAPTER OF FESTINA TEMPUS RIGHT THERE THAT YOU CAN COPY AND PASTE!!! https://www.wattpad.com/565544375-festina-tempus-rewrite-harry-potter-fanfiction Potions. The subject can be very challenging and difficult. One little mistake can do a range or things, from make a flexibility potion into a gender changing potion, to make it into a bend-in-two potion. It can change it dramatically, or it can change it just slightly. Well, Harry Potter was never the best at potions, was he? While making a de-aging potion, meant to make the drinker go back by only a few years for a period of time, depending on the size of the frog liver and the color of squid blubber, there was a slight mishap. What is a six year old Harry Potter in the care of a snake supposed to do? Cope without the memories that are slowly fading? Things are slowly falling downwards in a fast spiral. Draco Malfoy, on the other hand, feels as though his life is slowly slipping, along with his mental stability. He wouldn't find Potter anything close to adorable otherwise, right? P.S. Previously a one shot by the same name, Any bad grammar by Harry is on purpose Cover made by myself with art from google Word count: 18,376 Anything you recognize belongs to J.K.R.

I am a Riddle | Draco Malfoy, 18+ by juneekarl

REWRITING!! In which time would never be enough, and vows lived to be broken. | "Always such a good girl for me, aren't you?" Draco groaned into my parted lips, earning a moan from me as he forced himself deeper, rougher by the feeling of my body trembling in his grip, "Such a good girl," | "It seemed so perfect, but ended so soon." ___ A Draco Malfoy love story with a bunch of messy plots. Highest ranking; #2 in harrypotter #3 in malfoy #1 in dracofanfic ___ Trigger warning, This book contains mature content. Such as sexual relationships, violent actions, signs of sexual abuse, foul language, and character death. 18+ only. All the characters in this book are over the age of 17. I do own Leiah and the plots created by me, but other than that, I do not own any characters or events in this story. All credit goes to J.K Rowling,

Scared Potter? (Drarry fanfiction) by MicheSpade

Harry decides to prank Draco after a game of Quidditch. Desiring for Draco to go mad, he waits for him in an empty classroom. However, as soon as he realizes Draco wants to vent his anger in different way, he appears to be rather withdrawn and insecure - despite the fact he highly likes it. Does this mean Draco has more guts than Harry, after all? They decide to create a distance between them. After not seeing each other for months, they meet by utter chance. They are tensed, confused, and ready for a fall now school starts again. How will they manage, now shadows are trailing behind them? Draco, obnoxious and knocked with daddy issues. Harry, now insecure and put on edge - knowing he's the chosen one. EDIT: The first few chapters were written when I was around the age of 13. My English has developed over time. The first story is finished and ready to read throughout. The sequel is currently added and being updated as frequently as possible. Please enjoy!

ALLURING || D.M. by hpdani16

With the recent escape of someone's father, things start to change. Dark times approach and people are bound to take action. There are expectations to fill and last names to uphold, there are also teenagers who are forced to grow, face their terrors and find themselves. Funny how all of a sudden things turn around. Would you miss how simple your life was? Or prefer keeping what you have, no matter how complicated, hoping, just hoping for what you feel to be enough for there to be happiness in the end. Things are bound to get complicated... Harry Potter fanfiction. Draco Malfoy x OC Yes, she is a Lestrange, but they are not related. I repeat, they are NOT related.

The Cabin | D.M 18+ by CassieLinn

In a world where life never became fair, tears were endless and pain was normalised. For a man, a felon - Death Eater, Belle's graciousness blew in her face the moment she let him pass through the border of her cabin. A woman who'd been destined to cherish life. To save it. And only then, did the real nightmare begin, for the world was not ready to welcome a duo so corrupt. CURRENTLY UNDERGOING REMASTERING #1 on dracomalfoy #1 on draco #1 on dracoxreader #1 on spicy #1 on dracofanfic #1 on harrypotternextgeneration --------------- This is a dark Voldemort wins story. Warning's apply at the start of each chapter. Be sensible with what you read and don't push yourself. *I do not own any characters other than my own. Full character credits to J.K Rowling. This story also does not follow any original timeline. This plot, is mine, however. ©*

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Addicted To You | D.M by stxrquill

I don't spill anything, you don't. Whatever happens between us stays between us. You made me so mad in your love. I wish I knew how to quit you. Your love is like a drug that I can't give up. I'm addicted". ~ Draco Malfoy. Both their love was addicting for one another. They couldn't break the magnet pulling them back to each other. They knew it was bad but nothing could stop them. The story is based in 7th year at Hogwarts, however a completely different story to J.K. Rowling. The school year was the same each year, sleep, class, eat, repeat but this year was different. Eventful, for Alexa and others. She was overwhelmed in her mind. The thoughts of nights she could not spill. Not even to her best friend. She once dreamed of having everything. She got that. But things happen and she ends up going back to having nothing like she did before. She couldn't help it. She was addicted. Just like him... Drugs and sex bring everyone together but at the wrong time. "This shouldn't be happening" they both sighed at the thought. This book contains: Mature themes, Strong language, Drugs and alcohol, All characters are 16+ Please read at your own risk!

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Elle Dawson and Draco Malfoy are sharing the same friend group, but that doesn't make them friends, not even close. Cedric Diggory, Elle's boyfriend, gets in a fight with her which brings her a little too close with Draco. Months have passed when one of Voldemort's followers kills Cedric while he was working on his last task in the Triwizard Tournament. What is going to happen between Elle and Draco? When we all left the room, a hand grabbed my arm and brought me to an empty classroom. Malfoy. "What do you want?" I huff. Before I can process anything he pins me at the wall,once again, his hand on my neck. I can feel his cold rings touching my skin. "You and Diggory huh? It hasn't even been 2 hours since you were on your knees for me" His grip tightens. "I didn't know if you wanted them to know" I explain. "So what? Now you are going to let them believe that these marks belong to the Hufflepuff. I won't let it" He smirks. Edited version on ao3 (link in bio) This is the first book of the "Complicated" series!