My Immortal: Revised and Edited
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Last published Thu, Apr 5, 2018
A bunch of middle schoolers decided that My Immortal: The Original is really, really bad.
So they fixed it.
People are credited by chapter. Mature rating because for the most part, we kept the content that same. That means that the sex scenes went from looking like a kindergartener wrote them to looking like a middle schooler wrote them.
(Warning: Sexual Content)
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