FALLEN | one shot

FALLEN | one shot

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She has fallen and she can't get up on her own. Not without HIS help. She felt her heart falling apart on thousands of pieces and no one was able to pick them all up togheter, no one but HIM. ___________________________________________________________ It's my first story written fully in the English language. As I am not a native speaker I would be grateful for any comments on this story, my style of writing or maybe any corrections. Thanks a lot! Enjoy x
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