FALLEN | one shot - N.x

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Time 5m

Reads 15
Votes 1
Parts 1
Time 5m

She has fallen and she can't get up on her own. Not without HIS help. She felt her heart falling apart on thousands of pieces and no one was able to pick them all up togheter, no one but HIM.
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    It's my first story written fully in the English language. As I am not a native speaker I would be grateful for any comments on this story, my style of writing or maybe any corrections. Thanks a lot! Enjoy xAll Rights Reserved

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Fallen | one shot
Tue, Feb 13, 2018

She has fallen and she can't get up on her own. Not without HIS help. She felt her heart falling apart on thousands of pieces and no one was able to pick them all up togheter, no one but HIM.
    ___________________________________________________________
    
    It's my first story written fully in the English language. As I am not a native speaker I would be grateful for any comments on this story, my style of writing or maybe any corrections. Thanks a lot! Enjoy x

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