growing wings | Completed
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  • Reads 6,728
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  • Parts 82
  • Time 1h 32m
Complete, First published Feb 17, 2018
❝my freedom 
                   was at the cost 
                                       of my sanity❞

     how far would you go to earn your freedom, 
if it meant stripping away your happiness and losing your mind.
     freedom does not mean liberating yourself, spreading your wings,
and taking flight away from this big, bad world.
     nor does freedom necessarily mean freeing yourself,
sometimes it means to be trapped inside your own damn mind.

p r o g r e s s
started; 25th feb 2018
28th March 2018
highest; #56 in poetry

c o m m e n t s

"I just /devoured/ this book. I had to go back and vote because I became so invested the only thing that mattered was going to the next chapter. It's very beautiful and eloquent and I'm so glad to have stumbled open it. Keep up the good work!"
- @an-ardent-author

"Ur writing and the way the emotions are displayed here are very unique. Keep it up!"
- @VforViper

"God. Your work is extraordinary beautiful. I loved it where you said her eyes are like gold from rusting metal. Wow. Beautiful imagery." 
- @awesomeatc

"Wow. I love this, you are very talented."
- @25bluetiger25

"I'm really interested by this book so far, can't wait for the rest of the poems!"
- @SerenPenticuffPoet

"This was so touching! It draws ones emotions to the surface even if they don't know why."
- @Brooke_Lyn00

"Your descriptions for everything is LIFE."
- @-champion

"It flows very nicely, and it has some sparks! Well done!"
- @AurelienThomasAuthor

"Truly stygian but amazing."
- @Shreylockholmes

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"This speaks to my soul."
- @Survivors_Fan

"Your writing is amazing."
- @that_tall_bean

"I. Love. This. Has just the right rhythm and stirs an incredible amount of emotion in me."
- @poetadventurer

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