Eloise
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Last published Mon, Mar 19, 2018
El sueño de Eloise es bailar en el caño pero su madre se lo prohíbe terminantemente por ser un baile para 'prostitutas' o 'chicas regaladas' según lo cataloga ella.
Un día, su hermano mayor Dylan, aparece en su casa luego de años y por su falta de trabajo y de dinero se queda a vivir con ambas. Eloise siente repulsión hacía Dylan y todo lo que haga le molesta.
Ambos hermanos deben aliarse ya que Dylan descubre el gran secreto de Eloise.
Mentiras. Secretos. Mafia. Matanza. Y un sueño que podría costarles la vida a su familia y.. hasta a ella misma.
Historia hecha en conjunto con Ceci Stark19
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