Harry Potter OC Tips and Reviews (CLOSED)
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Last published Mon, Apr 9, 2018
Are you thinking of creating a character, but aren't sure where to start? Are you writing a fanfiction, and wondering if your character is too cliche? Maybe you've read every article you can find about what NOT to do when making a character, but it still isn't good enough. If you want a place to get a second opinion and fine-tune your character, this is the right place! In here I will give tips and how-tos beyond the well-known spectrum, and give you an honest opinion of your character so that you can go forth and make your OCs the best they can be!
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