Kinder Heart

Kinder Heart

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Fantasy
[INCOMPLETE] Eleonora, a girl with psychic abilities and knowledge in herbal medicine, is hunted by the capital only because she is half-human, half-elf. Then when a mysterious man shows up at her doorstep asking for a request to rise up against the capital, she has to learn to trust. Here's the thing; Eleonora never trusts anyone, as everyone wants to take a half-elf's life. I wanna make my writing better! Pls comment w/ CONSTRUCTIVE criticism pls!!
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*feedback and constructive criticism/advice much appreciated(this was written when I was in high school)* I would love to get opinions and ideas for more chapters, character development, background stories, and focus. This is a short story! Thanks :)

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