Open Your Eyes

Open Your Eyes

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Complete Wed, Mar 7, 201816m

coma fiction friendship teen

"Hey, I'm Megan." "Hi, I'm Lilly." "My best friend is in a coma." "I'm in a coma." "All I want is for her to wake up." "All I want is to never wake up."

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Behind The Screen [COMPLETE]

It's not everyday you hear that your best friend's in a coma. Imagine waking up one morning after spending the night with her, only to discover that she's hit her head and won't be waking up any time soon. Yeah, not exactly the best of feelings. • • • A story told through text messages. Inspired by 100 Voicemails, written by BookgirlingMoments. Highest ranking: #819 in Short Story • 05/10/2017 Behind The Screen. Copyright © June 2017. All Rights Reserved.

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