Beginnings - A Selection of First Chapters - Frank Linn

Beginnings - A Selection of First Chapters

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Parts 2
Time 7m

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As I review things that I have written in the past, I am going to put them in this story to get feedback on what I wrote.  Hopefully, criticisms, positive and less-positive, encourage me to continue writing and finishing that project, or severely re-writing it. 

Each post will contain two parts. The first part (odd numbers) will be the actual first chapter I have written. The second part (even numbers) will be a blurb of what I was going for and hopefully a place to get feedback that I'll consider going forward. I will include the genre in parenthesis at the end of the title. 

Please indicate in either of the posts if you'd continue reading based on that first chapter. I want to see if I can keep the reader interested to get to the next chapter. 

Thank you for your support & feedback.All Rights Reserved

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