Black War (Essay)

The essay takes place in the Middle-East warfare. After a international miliatry team enters a building and discovered an injured woman, one of the soldier decided to save her life, whatever the others soldiers are thinking.

This is my first write essay in English. (I'm french and my english isn't perfect, my weakness in english is on conversations "asked she", "I resume"), please be kind on your comments.

If the essay is good I will keep it to developp a real story with the chars. I didn't finish it yet, but I already want to have some feedback.

Genders of the essay : Action, Romance
TW : War, multiple deaths